News Release Critique

“Between what matters and what seems to matter, how should the world we know judge wisely?” -E.C. Bentley Hello again, This week, I have decided to critique “Dentist in Manchester Serves Community for Over 50 Years.” Not bad, Richard Berube. You got your title down to eight words. But! Did you remember to say “more … Continue reading

Blog Critique

“The truth will set you free, but first it will piss you off.” -Gloria Steinem Dearcoquette.com is my absolute favorite blog of all time. That’s why this week I’ve decided to critique it. The blog is from a supposedly coke addicted LA girl who gives advice to bloggers who write in asking questions on various … Continue reading

Website Critique

“If you would persuade, you must appeal to interest rather than intellect.” -Benjamin Franklin This week, I’ve decided to critique the website seventeen.com. This website’s targeted audience is primarily teenage girls. If I had to choose, I’d say their main style of appeal is logic, although it’s hard to tell by the first page if … Continue reading